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Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Ooh Bevil moving through the timeline is a very cool way to see what happens in Dewayne Hollow at different points. It’s so nice to see him grow up and have his own journey of importance!

Saint-Lazare's avatar

He's my little spy, and he will show up again hehe! Glad you liked it!

Mac Sitko's avatar

Insanely confident. Bevil’s arc is smashin’.

Not a romance guy, but the chemistry beat caught me.

Well done (or medium rare).

Saint-Lazare's avatar

Romance is not my calling either, this was a gift to someone. But I’m glad you enjoyed it nonetheless, Bevil is one hell of a character, thanks.

RM Greta's avatar

A very resourceful boy with chaotic energy! This was HOT And romantic and adventurous. Both temples were very cool images. I'm dying to know more. This was a lot of fun to read and felt like reliving old memories 🥲 Bevil is perfect for time travel!

Saint-Lazare's avatar

Heyyyyy I’m glad you liked what Bevil grew up to be 😁 and he's sticking around, that scoundrel!!!!

RM Greta's avatar

I am excited for all the trouble he's gonna get into. 😊

Saint-Lazare's avatar

… or create 😈