Oh Laz, you wicked oracle of our times. This story is quietly brilliant, a Trojan horse dressed in the clothes of satire, but carrying a haunting reflection of what scrolling really is: a ritual, an escape, a void, and, ultimately, a descent. Let me say this upfront: the piece is sly, hypnotic, and emotionally gripping in the best way. Also, low-key… the house being empty with dust… it gave me “you’ve been scrolling so long the world moved on without you” vibes, and I love that.
I loved this! The title and concept really intrigued me, and the full story was worth the wait! Will be discussing this on my podcast episode for this week, which will be going live shortly! I'll make sure to tag you, but I'm excited to share my thoughts on the show!
Just posted it! I hope you enjoy the shout out! I also referenced your story in the weekly "Thoughts From the Void With Voidy" section where I have a conversation with the show's cuttlefish mascot, haha.
Oh Laz, you wicked oracle of our times. This story is quietly brilliant, a Trojan horse dressed in the clothes of satire, but carrying a haunting reflection of what scrolling really is: a ritual, an escape, a void, and, ultimately, a descent. Let me say this upfront: the piece is sly, hypnotic, and emotionally gripping in the best way. Also, low-key… the house being empty with dust… it gave me “you’ve been scrolling so long the world moved on without you” vibes, and I love that.
I loved this! The title and concept really intrigued me, and the full story was worth the wait! Will be discussing this on my podcast episode for this week, which will be going live shortly! I'll make sure to tag you, but I'm excited to share my thoughts on the show!
It’s 3:33am here and I might be screaming. Wow! I look forward to hear your thoughts, thanks a lot 😮
Just posted it! I hope you enjoy the shout out! I also referenced your story in the weekly "Thoughts From the Void With Voidy" section where I have a conversation with the show's cuttlefish mascot, haha.
I’m going to check both now, I'm very grateful, thanks.
This was cool, almost a bit psychedelic at the end.
Thanks!
Daaaaang, this was great! Definitely continue writing horror, there is really something here!!
I will!
You keep giving me the best feedback possible 🙏🏻🌹