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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Phenomenal entry here! I love the repetition of the “I am…” phrase. It creates a haunting rhythm that drives the piece forward.

Some truly standout lines throughout as well. I really hope this one gets picked!

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

Thanks, we'll see 💀💀💀

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Hayley Stone's avatar

I am the terror that flaps in the night. Sorry couldn’t resist 😉 Have to laugh otherwise I’d cry.

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

That's fine haha

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Garen Marie's avatar

Wow this hits so hard. Especially that last line. Oooof. Excellent.

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

Thanks!

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Oscar Ruto Chemelil's avatar

Bro…. 🔥🔥🔥

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

💀💀💀

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Absolutely excellent in its spiritual level of creepiness. Great stuff!

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

Thank you 🙏🏻

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