Your words pull me into a warm, restless mood. It’s clear and flows well, making me feel the yellow heat. I like how it keeps me guessing, though I sometimes want more to hold onto 😊
I enjoyed this! I especially laughed so hard with this line " Once, when I was a child, I saw her pass out after discovering a cruel dandelion in the middle of her lawn." Whahaha and the mention of Barbara being a vampire. Such comedic tragedy.
Also liked that story; the King In Yellow
Really nice flow.
Simplicity at its best.
Thanks!
Your words pull me into a warm, restless mood. It’s clear and flows well, making me feel the yellow heat. I like how it keeps me guessing, though I sometimes want more to hold onto 😊
I enjoyed this! I especially laughed so hard with this line " Once, when I was a child, I saw her pass out after discovering a cruel dandelion in the middle of her lawn." Whahaha and the mention of Barbara being a vampire. Such comedic tragedy.
Thanks! It is my funniest story so far. I’d love to write more, especially with a bittersweet aftertaste. I'm glad you liked it.
I really did, it got me in a chokehold at the very beginning!
Wow ☺️